Yes, it is nitpick. Just like my comments on Han Solo were nitpicking. It doesn't make the story NOT work. Doesn't make the movie less enjoyable.
Yeah, it does. The emotional core of the film is Jyn Erso's relationship with her father. So it's a problem when that emotional core doesn't affect the 2nd half of the movie.
Maybe it's just a coincidence that the film in which the emotional buildup of the first half is mostly/completely abandoned is also the film that many people who saw it said the first half was
boring. I dunno.
But to your first statement: no that's not a ****ing nitpick. This isn't an inconsequential detail that can be swept under the rug- like how Rey does not look like someone who has lived the last 10-15 years of her life as if she were a destitute thrall trapped in wage-slavery on DESERT PLANET.....II- but the story of the film not connecting on a scene-by-scene basis moments after it hit a high emotional beat!
Why am I supposed to be affected or care about Galen Erso's death if Jyn Erso herself doesn't care, or that said death, supposedly emotionally devastating for her (again, for some reason), has little to no impact on her actions outside of being a plot device?
You seriously don't think the film would be better if it realized that Jyn Erso should probably still be upset that the Rebellion
killed her father? Like, instead of Jyn begging the Rebels to believe her and getting, "Meh" as a response, she tries to convince them but loses her cool over that precise point? And then Cassian convinces her that she needs to forgive the Rebellion, at least for now, so as to focus on the very important mission and thus preserving her father's legacy, if not literally but spiritually?
Like, you know, she has an actual freaking character arc that's connected to what happens on screen? You don't think that would improve Rogue One???
Is the movie perfect? No. It doesn't have to be. Hollywood films have these inconsistencies all the time. They are products. R1 is a product and works well as such. It is fun, mostly hits all the right notes and function perfectly within the Star Wars universe. Do the flaws really hinder the experience? Meh, maybe if you REALLY want to pay attention to that stuff.
Oh, I love this! "The movie isn't perfect, therefore if you're thinking critically about it you're just being mean."
The OT is filled with cheesy moments and does have some inconsistencies (Han, Lando, to re-use the examples I have used before).
Actually, there are two scenes in ANH that foreshadow Han showing up for the Death Star fight: in
this scene at ~:25, and later, when Luke confronts Han about it, both which show he's conflicted about it. So when he shows up later it's not an out of nowhere inconsistency but a realization of his character arc. The same arc they tried (and kinda failed) to do with Jyn Erso: selfish misanthropic a-hole learns to be a part of something bigger than him/herself.
Not sure what your problem is with Lando, for one, Han trusting Lando easily is actually
the point, (the point being that Han is kinda full of ****); for two, he betrays the Empire after a series of scenes in which Vader shows he's going to doublecross them/does doublecross them, capped with the great line, "I am altering the deal: pray I don't alter it further."; for three the heroes trust Lando afterwards (or accurately, Leia "trusts" him as Chewie immediately tries to murder Lando via asphyxiation by Wookie) because they don't exactly have a choice, and because Leia desperately wants to save Han; for four, this is all clearly communicated to the audience.
Han and Lando are fully justified characters (which is why they're memorable), while in the example I provided above, Jyn Erso goes from being furious at the Rebellion to trying to rally them in ~3 minutes because......who knows? I guess she forgot.
You're misunderstanding Lando's motivations. He was responsible for Cloud City and its inhabitants...he told Han and Leia he made the deal he felt would keep those under his care safe. He wasn't told Han would be used to experiment with freezing a human in the carbon gas freezing chamber, nor that Leia and Chewbacca would be turned over to Vader. But the last straw was learning Vader planned to leave a permanent garrison of stormtroopers on Cloud City, endangering the freedom of its citizens. That's when he turned on the Empire, when he realized there was no way to come out ahead in a deal with them.
I saw Empire recently, IIRC the last straw was Vader ordering Leia and the Wookie to be taken onto his ship (this being after Lando promised Leia that she would be safe on Cloud City), with aforementioned great line.
But it works so well, it isn't Lando going from "Team Empire" to "Team Rebels" over one little thing, but a slow, steady progression- so that when he does turn, it makes perfect sense. And I agree, they paint Lando as someone who took the deal because, as he understood it, they weren't actually going to hurt Han or Leia or anyone, they just wanted them as bait for Luke.
On this topic I think it's great that the heroes on Cloud City actually manage to escape
mostly without the help of Luke (meaning that Yoda/Alec Guiness were right, all he was doing was rushing into a trap without thinking, to really no great effect anyway beyond being trounced by Vader). Great movie.