Brian39
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The subject of the article was the opinion that Armstrong and the Blues had bungled trade negotiations and killed Tarasenko's trade value. It isn't remotely difficult to show the "other side" of that opinion (or to demonstrate support for that opinion) without the Blues giving him a quote that they are actually good at their jobs and totally not botching it.That article is bad. He does include a press quote from Armstrong to try to show the other side. It is difficult to show the other side if he is being frozen out.
The opinion is that not trading Tarasenko immediately was a horrible mistake. Good information to include from other sources would be what types of offers were presented to the Blues immediately following the request, what teams Tarasenko would accept a trade to, what types of offers the Blues were presenting to teams, what offers were on the table immediately following the expansion draft, Tarasenko's perceived value according to other prominent agents, Tarasenko's perceived value according to the Athletic's in-house statistical model, etc.
None of this requires a meaningful comment from the organization you are actively criticizing. No journalist should expect the organization to offer meaningful insight into active trade negotiations. That isn't being frozen out of a story. That is business as usual for every team in the league. If you can't get a single source to around the league to comment about how the first 3 weeks of negotiations following a public trade request have impacted the player's trade value, then that is your own problem and you shouldn't write a story about it.
FWIW, all 6 references to the source talking about the perceived trade value are referred to a 'the source.' The only time he uses 'a source' is the reaction quote to Army's statement about Tarasenko needing to be ready to come to camp.I do think the way he referenced his source is intentionally confusing. It definitely reads like he has one source an is trying to hide the fact he has one source. He should be clear when referencing sources if they are the same or not. "A source said" when you already referenced an anounymous source is not a good way to put it. It shoud be "The same source" or "a second/another source".
I agree that his language is intentionally confusing though. I can't tell whether that source is different or not, but he is at least somewhat straightforward that he only has the one anonymous source supporting the thesis opinion of the article.
Agreed. It is pretty basic journalism to provide as much detail as you can about the nature of your source's position. 'League source' is intentionally vague and clearly used to cover up the bias of his source. There is no chance it was an accident.He should also detail where the source is situated. "A source close to Tarasenko's camp" as to opposed to a "league source". If the source was a GM in the league, I think he is fine. But it does appear to be Tarasenko's agent.
My issue is that the way he wrote the article is so enormously below the standards of undergraduate level journalism sourcing that there is absolutely no chance it wasn't intentional. He very clearly made the decision to give his source a platform to push their agenda completely unchallenged and then did everything he could to try and hide the fact that he was doing it.So I have qualms about how he worte the article. But again, the topic is a worthy thing to discuss, as would be a league source saying Tarasenko's value is falling (just not his agent as a source). It would be fine but it just wasn't discussed in the right way.
I don't think this rises to the level of hate he gets. I also think it is slightly on the Blues for freezing him out. If you don't want one-sided articles written, give the journalist with a national outlet with good reach covering your team a quote, even a generic one.
It is shitty journalism and he is now living with the consequences. Once you actively pick a side in a negotiation, the side you picked against doesn't treat you like a journalist anymore. And they shouldn't.