It's exactly right. The only one I might change is Mete over Fox, but even that is debatable.
Fox had less points than Makar and was constantly walked all tournament long. There is not a chance he was better than Timmins or Makar plus you just mentioned Mete and that is only the Canadian guys that were better. The Czech guy was a much better player than Fox as well. So that's 3 guys that are clearly better options and at least 1 other that was in consideration.
Kyrou had more points than Zadina, Batherson scored the same amount goals and both guys team was way more impressive. Both guys clearly deserve to be there more than him.
Gustafsson is a bad choice over Hart but nothing really to scream about but with the rest of the choices seems like an odd choice.
Having two guys from each of the Czechs and USA who are clearly much worse than Canada and zero from Canada is laughable.
He is a writer for a pay site that realizes the Canadians care about this the most so if he leaves them off the list it drives a lot more traffic to his site than if he made a legit list.