Thanks for the feedback guys. I had my second show today, 20 minutes long opening for Christopher Hall and The Comedic Orchestra, you'd probably recognize him from Just for Laughs. I took a lot of your comments in to consideration. I worked the pacing in to my set so if I did pace, I had a reason.
There was about 150 people there tonight, so a little less than my first show, but I wasn't really nervous this time around.
If anyone would like to watch my set, I uploaded part of it to YouTube. Feedback is appreciated!