Tribute Need opinion on logo mockup as part of MA Project

[Shawklan27]

I want the logos to be presented under a "manhattan" word script akin to what buffalo did with their reebok wordmark jersey from before. I haven't thought of the jersey designs yet so I went ahead and made these logo variations of the rangers. Which one of these ones works the best? This is apart of my project to make a city jersey for each nhl team akin to what the mlb and nba and doing with some of their teams. Any and all feedback would be greatly appreciated thanks!

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[Kane One]

Can you do one without any dot after the N and Y?

I like the fourth one the best.

 

[Shawklan27]

Yeah I can definitely do that. I left the dots in as a reference to the rangers 2018 winter classic logo.

 

[Kane One]

Yeah I can definitely do that. I left the dots in as a reference to the rangers 2018 winter classic logo.

I guess that’s fine then. Just absolutely no to a dot after the N and no dot after the Y.

 

[Ola]

I guess that’s fine then. Just absolutely no to a dot after the N and no dot after the Y.

Was going to say the same, like one but needs two dots!

Cool work BTW!

 

[GENESISPuck94]

I like the 3rd one but make the Y the same color as the N. Remove the periods and move the NY closer to the middle.

 

[Peltz]

Two dots or zero dots.

One dot is a no-no. Love everything else about this though! Nice colors and all.

 

[Chalfdiggity3]

I like the 2nd and the last one. They are clearly legible and the right parts of what you want to see are visible