Site started in January 2017. Based out of Edmonton but with writers in Boston and Mexico. Plan was baseball, wrestling, hockey, NFL, basketball. The NFL and basketball left and the wrestling guy bought the site after year one.
I'm a baseball guy and the only local baseball is the Edmonton Prospects of the WMBL. I'm a Flames fan who lives in Edmonton but doesn't hate the Oilers.
That's it in a nutshell.
Gotcha! Well I liked this article quite a bit more than your previous one, mostly due to flow. You did a good job of commenting on the in-game highlights and summarizing it with your overall opinion to back it up. I think really all you need is more repetition, as you go you will become more polished at doing this.
I asked about the site background because I think it heavily influences the “tone” of your pieces (or at least it should). The writing style isn’t super formal but I also don’t think it’s 100% your goal to be that way. From reading it, I get that you’re trying to convey the highlights of each game while allowing your personality and personal opinions to come through.
The main media outlets mostly eliminate this. Sure each author has their own distinct writing style, but most of their personality and personal bias are left out of it. I don’t think it’s a positive or negative thing, personally I find it somewhat refreshing. But I would just ensure that this aspect is consistent with the other writers on your forum.
Good job! I give credit to anyone who does anything like this so I wish you well.